We looked at the multimedia packages for the Olympics and story boarded them and I noticed that some of the packages seemed better than others, even though they were edited and put together by the same people. The package about the long jumper stuck out at me, and this is because the editing was too choppy. They tried to make the package “interesting” by adding a lot of slow motion and quick cuts, but instead it distracted me from what she was trying to say. I think that a key to multi media packages is simplicity when trying to give a message. It is not that you cannot embellish or experiment, just that if you have a purpose, especially when they are talking, don’t detract from it by giving us too much to watch.